smoke drifts in the wind sensationally
rain takes in the romance secretly
The wind dances with the clouds and rain
arise the dense smoke and densier mist drift in pain
loneliness walks through years and days
pinching sorrow always
listens to the wind crooning my life always
rain, what are you thinking
the whisper of your gentle desire
the friendship and love you are seeking
the care of fallen flowers in days of rain
with ink, dark or thin,
you paint flowers black or white to show off spring
intimately with me, moors the evening light
shrouded through a screen of smoky rain in delight
embraces me with special times of old
listen, half the night
the tick tick sounds break silence gold
welcome! morning bright
a sunny day spreads out its blue and cool
sweet and free
knowing you are here
in my dream, happiness meandering there
How a deeply loving and inspirational poem! It brings so much special feelings through wind and rain, ink and painting, to sorrow, pain, loneliness and then finally turned to a bright morning, sunny day, sweet and free happiness. The subject, smoky rain at a lonely evening, takes you into a deeply emotional mood yet loving and friendship desired state, but the words continue take you go along with the peaceful rain, finally wait until the bright morning and sunny day coming, letting you appreciate love, happiness and hope so much.
Despite a free verse poem, I still can see your great efforts making it very soundly rhythmic and beautiful. It is not easy to translate Chinese poem into a English poem like poem. Excellent!
A very special way of a Chinese woman's loving poem writing, I can feel it; very gentle, sweet, yet deeply loving. It is very beautiful. Thank you for such a special and excellent writing!
You made my day, my friend.
A very special way of encouraging me. I hope to see you more and don't hesitate to criticize
me, for that's the only way to improve.